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I love your concept of ghosts. I'm a lover of true ghost stories, but it explains a lot of what people can't explain about them. The only problem I have is it's a lot of tell, but very little show. An example of showing vs telling. When you say they crave food, that's telling. By showing, you'd create an actual scene as an example. For example, you have a scene where there's an apple on a table. She tries to ignore it, but it's there. She turns her eyes away as she recalls what an apple tastes like. It's like a drug withdraw.